Monday 26 March 2012

Chapter 46: Finale


And finally Madiyah graduated. After the graduation party, Madiyah went back home and got dressed. Her parents threw a surprise party at their yacht. Before she got out of the car she checked her make up one more time, she stared at her dark red lips and smiled, hoping that today she would steal someone’s heart.

She had planned everything out and once the surprise was over and everyone came to congratulate her, she stood there waiting for that particular person. But he didn’t show up. She had asked about him, but they all didn’t know where he was. Although she noticed how 3abdl3aziz was getting a little attached to her now that they were spending a lot of time together, she couldn’t stop thinking of him. She could imagine every second with him. Before the yacht set off to take them on a tour around, he walked in. She noticed how her classmates were slowly turning their necks towards him, some of them were bulging- their eyes were literally about to pop out-. He walked in with a girl, a girl who wore a short dress and had her hair down. It was tremendously unexpected. He walked towards her; 3abdl3aziz wrapped his arm around her waist and whispered in her ears Are you ready?

She knew she had to act along, so she smiled and whispered back which made him laugh out loud. He stared at the way 3abdl3aziz was so close to her, and how she looked at him. He smiled, jealous.

Madiyah, mabrook. He came closer and kissed her cheek. I would like you to meet this dazzling young lady Moza.

Mabrook.

Thank you, it’s nice to meet you.

She smiled; she looked young, no more than 17. She was pretty.

The yacht took off and everything was perfect. They stopped to some spot in the middle of the sea, staring at JBR at night, the view was breathtaking, and the music was romantic. She walked towards 3abdl3aziz coming closer and closer leaving a small gap between them. She slowly wrapped her arms behind his neck locking the position, their nose touched. They swayed together. The lights were dimmed. She watched him in the corner of her eyes, the way he watched her move.

You’re beautiful. She bit her lower lip and shyly and stared at the floor. He whispered in her ear, which made her blush. He sat there, staring at how they were together. Cursing the day he travelled back and left her.

The fireworks blew up in the dark clear sky, the colors shining reflecting on the waves. 5leefh stood beside her and stared at her and she watched the fireworks blow up. She tilted her head just a bit, looked at his astounding beauty and smiled.  3abdl3aziz held her hand and kissed her cheek. She stood in the middle of two who loved her so much, but one won the challenge and got her and the other one won her heart, it was an ongoing battle.

Once the fireworks were over everyone had dinner then Madiyah cut her cake.  5leefh went up to her and asked her if she could dance with him. She agreed.

Madiyah… he whispered, and looked right into her eyes, confessing.

I’ll never forgive you for what you’ve done to me. She smiled, and placed her head on his chest. She heard his heart beat faster.

I’m so glad you accepted.

Accepted what?

Don’t act like I never told you.

Don’t be ridiculous, I have no idea what you’re talking about.

When I look at you I see the love of my life, the one that I know and always knew that one day I’ll call you my wife. I am in love with a beautiful girl who stole my heart and trust me I can’t tell you how I felt when I first realized that there is hope, hope in which she could be mine. And that beautiful girl is you.

 I’m what…….. She stopped dancing and stood still, he held her hands.


You’re my wife. You Madiyah AlX is the wife of 5leefh AlX. As simple as that. I knew you’d never open the envelope, I knew you’d never let go of the heartbroken necklace that’s hanging on your neck right now. He got out the other heart and stuck them together. I know that forever and ever you will always be mine and I will be yours. Couldn’t you see? Everyone was confusing you but you stood strong and still and made your own decision, 3abdl3aziz was confusing you and convincing you that he was your husband all along. The instant I set foot on the airplane I told my parents that I want you, and they agreed. Your mother all along was confusing you too; she said you were taken and you are, you’re mine and I am yours. Nothing can break us apart.
I’m confused. So you’re telling me that 3abdl3aziz was acting like my husband for the past week? And everyone knew the plan except me?
That’s right.
She couldn’t believe what’s happening. She pinched herself wishing it was all a dream, but it wasn’t.
What about Lamya's party? Why were they congratulating me? And why did you act so cold? And who’s Moza?
Because one of the ladies at the party thought that 3abdl3aziz was me and you left, you didn't give me a chance to tell you and explain to you what was going on. Right after you walked out my mother and your mother said that I was your husband and not 3abdl3aziz. Moza is my cousin. She wanted to see you since she never got the chance to meet you in the engagement party.
Wow…
He kneeled down on one knee and got out a box, and opened it. It was a wedding band set with brilliant-cut diamonds. I love you. She placed her hand on her heart, astonished! He placed the ring on her ring finger and the rings looked like a united set.
I love you too. She hugged him tightly. 

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11 comments:

  1. OHMYGOSH Amazing <333
    Didn't expect it to finish this soon :(
    Love your story xx
    -Dee

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    1. Thank you darling!! We're glad you love our story <3

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  2. OMG loved the post and i adore your story. I didnt want it to finish :(

    http://7mdowh-unbreakable.blogspot.com/

    xoxo

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  3. WOOOOW !!
    I'm glad she ended up with 5alifa <3333
    I have a question and I'm dying to know it's answer ..
    Why did they all play her and caused her such heartbreak ?
    I mean what's the point ?
    Waiting for your next story xD

    -3alia

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    1. :D YAAAY <3 We LOVE answering questions from our readers :D

      Because he wanted to prove them (the family - all of them) wrong, he wanted to show them that she still believed in him and he believed in her, but there was a percentage of fear, fear of being rejected but that necklace that stayed on her neck was a sign of hope and faith. Heartbreaks are usually the ones that end up being great stories.

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  4. *standing ovation* This is by far the best story I have ever read on blogspot.com or even better worldwide! A story written by two young Emiratis, we are more than proud of you!!! I LOVE 5LEEFH & MOST OF ALL I LOVE YOU! His words are the sweets ;___________; <333333

    I LOVE YOU!!!! I CAN'T WAIIIIT UNTIL YOUR NEXT STORY. I also appreciate the fact that you mentioned me in the end, I am more than grateful. Love you guys!

    J*

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    1. *bows* LOL!!! The stand ovation made us laugh so much <3 Thank you so much darling it means a lot to us :')<3 We're proud of having you as a beloved reader!
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      WE LOVE YOU TOO!!!!

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  5. U guys should write a book u guys write so beautifuly and passionatly I ADORED it

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  6. i love the black lace gown whats the brand ?

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  7. read it all in a day and i still want more :"( <3

    http://hershadowindubai.blogspot.ae/ ~

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